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RE: "Desafío Steemit s26wk1: El Proyecto de Oficina"

This was such an engaging read, you built the suspense beautifully from the quiet, rainy afternoon right into the high-stakes discovery of Project X-17. I really liked how the investigation unfolded step-by-step, using scanners, decryption programs, and hidden cameras; it made me feel like I was right there in the conference room with them. The revelation that it wasn’t just a technical project but a secret social experiment to influence emotions was a twist I didn’t see coming, and it instantly raised the stakes.

The tension between ethics and ambition was one of the strongest points in your story. The moment Javier accidentally triggered the security system added just the right dose of drama, and it reminded me how even small missteps can change the course of a big discovery. I also appreciated that your ending didn’t shy away from the moral side, having the company embrace transparency with ethical safeguards felt satisfying and meaningful.

If there’s one thing I think could have been explored even more, it would be diving deeper into the emotional weight of their debates the night before the big meeting. Letting us see more of the internal conflict in each character could have added an extra punch of melodrama. Still, the pacing, twists, and message made this a memorable story about teamwork, integrity, and the hidden truths right under our noses.