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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk1 : The Office Project
Dear @neelofar, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.75/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.75/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | You did start with a decent hook but it felt like you played safe instead of pushing the boundaries of mystery or fantasy. |
| Total | 9.35/10 |
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- You checked most of the contest's boxes like hidden truth, melodrama, a plan, and a win at the end but the "fantasy" side was undercooked, making it feel more like a straightforward corporate thriller than a transportive piece of fiction.