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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk1 : The Office Project
Dear @peachyladiva, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.75/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 1/1 | You pulled me in from the very first line and kept the momentum right through to the closing sentence. |
| Total | 9.75/10 |
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- The ending delivered the fame to the company, but your main characters got no recognition. It sounds realistic, but it slightly mutes the "world-wide fame" payoff from the brief. Overall, your structure was clean and your scenes transitioned smoothly, so I had no trouble following the narrative.