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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk1 : The Office Project
Dear @wuddi, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 0.75/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.75/1 | The ending doesn't match the "worldwide fame for the company" requirement — here, the company is destroyed instead. |
| Total | 9/10 |
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- You clearly had a story you wanted to tell, but you didn't fully shape it to fit the contest brief. If you had reimagined the ending so the company gets fame because of the discovery (even if the dark secret stays hidden or is spun positively), you'd match the rules while keeping tension.