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RE: *Steemit Challenge s26wk1 : The Office Project"
Dear @sojib1996, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.75/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.75/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.75/1 | You didn't take a single narrative risk; the plot is a straight line from idea to success, which makes it predictable and flat. |
| Total | 8.75/10 |
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- You built a realistic business story, but you missed the mystery and fantasy elements central to the contest's theme. If you had added a hidden corporate secret, an unexpected discovery, or some surreal twist, your story could have matched the contest's spirit and been far more engaging.