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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk1 : The Office Project"
Dear @ruthjoe, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3 /3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 0.75/1 | In the original prompt, the solution brings "world-wide fame," but in your version, the victory is local to the town. |
| Total | 9.25/10 |
Feedback
- You pulled me in with a strong premise and distinct characters. The sabotage device is interesting, but I wish you explained more about how it worked and why the rivals planted it.
I got limited with the number of words required, after writing it all I checked for my number of words and it was above a thousand, I had to remove some details to fit into the number of words.
Am glad you enjoyed my story. Thank you for your verification
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