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RE: "Steemit Challenge s26wk1 : The Office Project"
Dear @senehasa, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.75/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.75 /3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 0.75/1 | The supposed "danger" of this project being buried was teased, but then nothing really came of it. |
| Total | 9.25/10 |
Feedback
- The hidden project idea was engaging, and the locked box discovery worked well. Adding a few more unexpected twists or imaginative details would make it stand out even more.
Thanks a lot for your feedback and valuable thoughts.
I focused here on teamwork and success, using the danger only to add a touch of suspense without making the story dark. My main aim was to highlight the discovery and the team’s achievement while keeping the tone positive.