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RE: SLC-S26/W1 | The Office Project
Dear @uzma4882, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.75/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 0.75/1 | The fame ending came too fast. |
| Total | 9/10 |
Feedback
- You gave me a mystery that started strong and had believable teamwork, but you left some of the best opportunities untouched. You brushed past "ethical concerns" and didn't dig into the tension or personal stakes that could have made the story unforgettable.
Thank you for the review. I will try my best to deeply imagination and meet the requirements for that challenge in up coming challenges. Thank you.
0.00 SBD,
0.01 STEEM,
0.01 SP