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RE: Desafío Steemit s26wk1: El Proyecto de Oficina
Dear @astilem, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 1/1 | The idea of a vaccine for depression is intriguing and works well for fiction. |
| Total | 9.8/10 |
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- You've delivered a heartfelt, relatable story with a strong emotional payoff and a satisfying conclusion. However, the "thrilling quest" and deeper mystery elements from the original narrative weren't fully explored.