Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate


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Timothy never thought that the person he was inviting to share his room with could be a dangerous invitation, because when Ronnie first came to him, he came with big dreams and seemed like a decent guy who wore his nice clothes and spoke with confidence. He wanted to start an import and export business. Ronnie's face looked like he would be happy to have any roommate. Because he was going to be happy to find a humble and hardworking person with plans for the future.

All this trust was shattered one day when Timothy returned from work early, and when he opened the door, he saw Ronnie bent down and holding a black bag in front of him. There was a dim light in the room, in which all its contents were shining, including the steel cutters, drills, bunches okeysey, and a gun. Seeing all this, Timothy's breath caught, and he looked at it in surprise, wondering if these tools belonged to a merchant. Because these tools looked like the tools of a thief, a spy, or someone living another life.

At that moment, Timothy's silence was broken, and he asked with great anxiety, "What is all this?" Ronnie stiffened, and his hand fell on the gun before he slowly pushed it into the bag. His eyes sparkle, and he said in a very soft tone, "This is none of your business."

Timothy came closer and said nervously. He was trembling and nervous at that time. He said, "You are starting a business, so what's the use of a gun and a bunch of keys in this business?"

Ronnie would slip up and be exposed to everything Timothy said. In the meantime, he half-closed the zipper of the bag and whispered, saying, "Sometimes we trade with money and sometimes with other goods. This is a secret."

Timothy was even more surprised at this and looked at Ronnie, and various thoughts were coming to his mind, wondering if he was a thief or a criminal, or a spy. According to the truth of what has been told, he is not at all.

Timothy stiffened when he heard it was a secret and tried to steady his voice. He asked in surprise, "Is this a secret? Are you trying to tell me?" Timothy wanted Roni to say that it was a lie like a play, but his words seemed to be the truth, which made him even more worried. In his distress, he said, "Either you tell me the truth or I will call the police."

Ronnie said police, and upon hearing this, he took a deep breath and lay back down and said that I am trying to live a normal life, but the shadows are not far behind in chasing you, so.

The room fell silent, and Timothy wondered if his roommate was a businessman. Because the whole truth had dawned on him. He was sitting in front of a man who had revealed secrets so sharp that he could destroy trust.


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Originally, Ronnie was a secret intelligence person who had gone to different countries for different missions, due to which he had to involve himself in different tasks, including breaking down doors, opening locks, and carrying guns for his security. He used to use all these tools, but now he wanted to call it quits and forget about it, and live a normal life, because in this mission, he often faced the problem of elimination.

Timothy had a very difficult night because all those tools were coming before his eyes. Then he thought that he would tell the police in the morning, but he could not tell the police because he did not know that Ronnie was a businessman, and he could not prove him wrong. So he went to his work. When he returned from work, he found a lot of silence in his room and did not find all the tools around him, and saw a big note on the table on one side.

On this note, Ronnie had written, "Timothy, I was there for you when I needed you. I am very grateful to you for sheltering me, but I am not who you think I am. I grew up under one of the shadows, and the shadow never leaves me so easily. If I had stayed there for a while, that shadow would have found me again, and you would have had to pay the debt of my worth, and all my troubles would have been on you."

You may hear some whispers about me because by the time you read this note, I will be gone, and I want to make it clear that I was never your enemy.

Timothy sat down at a table while reading this note and began to wonder if this was the person who had been with me for weeks, but I couldn't find out the truth. Was this a thief? Was this a spy? Was this a third person? Or was it all three?

For weeks, he had been wondering who he was and why he had come here, but it is guaranteed that the curiosity about Ronnie's double life will always remain. We will never know why he came here, what his previous life was like, or under what circumstances he grew up. These were Timothy's final words.

I would like to invite my friends @crismenia, @abdullahw2, and @mohammadfaisal to join this challenge.

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Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate

Dear @ahsansharif , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

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Story start to finish4.5/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.8/3
Presentation1/1
My observation0.9/1
Total9.2/10

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*If Ronnie was a secret intelligence officer deployed in different countries for different missions, by the government why was he hesitant or feeling guilty?

  • You have used up a lot of footage in repeating the facts already present in the prompt which slowed down the flow of the story. A little more suspense could have taken this theme to a greater end.

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Thank you so much for the assessment and the valuable feedback.

If Ronnie was a secret intelligence officer deployed in different countries for different missions, by the government why was he hesitant or feeling guilty?

He was a member of a certain agency, but he was made quite famous among the people for having committed some murders, which is why he decided to quit his job and start living a normal life.

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