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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate
Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate
Dear @ahsansharif , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.8/3 | |
| Presentation | 1/1 | |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | |
| Total | 9.2/10 |
*If Ronnie was a secret intelligence officer deployed in different countries for different missions, by the government why was he hesitant or feeling guilty?
- You have used up a lot of footage in repeating the facts already present in the prompt which slowed down the flow of the story. A little more suspense could have taken this theme to a greater end.
Thank you so much for the assessment and the valuable feedback.
He was a member of a certain agency, but he was made quite famous among the people for having committed some murders, which is why he decided to quit his job and start living a normal life.