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RE: Desafío Steemit T26-w2 | Compañero de piso misterioso
Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate
Dear @rosselena, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.7/5 | good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | |
| Total | 9.5/10 |
Your story had a lot of potential but you rushed things up which lessened the fiction part.
I was wondering if Ronnie's mission was completed why didn't he leave the house silently but offered Timothy all the money? You missed at a few points otherwise it was a great attempt.
Gracias por la verificación y por la retroalimentación amigo @dove11 seguiré intentandolo en las semanas restantes
Saludos