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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate
Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate
Dear @ , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Okay |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Okay |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | good |
| My observation | 0.8/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.4/10 |
I was wondering why a wood craft worker who lost his business in an accident having plans for export import business, coming to a different city to stay in a shared room brought his tool kit? (Remember the bunches of keys in his bag in the prompt)
You left couple of lose ends for instance a bar selling a full bottle of whiskey or what kind of papers the file had that detective handed to Timothy! The end seemed to be too abrupt and compromising which could be tightened up.
I understand that there were scenes left incomplete, that was so because I had to re-edit to suit the number of words requested. I'm excited that these observations were made.
I humbly suggest maybe words should be extended to a thousand in the next edition. Thank you for the review, it's appreciated.
Thanks for suggestion but my observation was not based on unanswered questions but the facts. Word limit is part of the strategical test of this contest.
It's noted sir, thank you!