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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2 : Mysterious Roommate

in #fiction-s26wk23 days ago
Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate

Dear @ , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.9/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness3/3Good
Presentation0.9 /1Okay
My observation1/1Good
Total9.8/10

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  • Your idea seems unique about Ronnie's tools that he brought to confuse Timothy.

  • Your idea to present Ronnie in disguise and pretend to show him as a criminal to take Timothy in his confidence was a good trick.

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