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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w2| Mysterious Roommate
Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate
Dear @uzma4882, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4/5 | |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.5/3 | |
| Presentation | 0.8/1 | |
| My observation | 0.7/1 | |
| Total | 8/10 |
The story was supposed to revolve round the host Timothy but there isn't a single entry of main protagonist in your story mentioned in the prompt.
Surprisingly the roommate Ronnie is supposed to involved in mysterious activities since he had weapons used for underworld activities but in your story Ronnie is psycho killer with paintings of all his previous murders.