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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate
Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate
Dear @adese, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.2/5 | - |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.6/3 | - |
| Presentation | 0.8/1 | - |
| My observation | 0.8/1 | Okay |
| Total | 8.4/10 |
I wonder why Ronnie walked out with his tool bag for a meeting where they were discussing business with scattered guns, maps, stacks of cash and coded papers?
Why did Timothy leave his house one quiet Sunday morning? He had better options than leaving his house for a criminal. I missed touch of fiction and thrill in this story.