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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate

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Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate

Dear @aviral123, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3
Presentation0.9/1
My observation0.9/1
Total9.4/10

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  • It was great theme but ended too abruptly. It was great theme but ended too abruptly. A little touch of fiction would have made it a great story. But overall it was a nice idea.
    *Ronnie said, the gang was about to be busted within minutes as it was already surrounded by all sides so what role Timothy played in the end or how was his intel utilized?

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