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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate
Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate
Dear @mahmud552 , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4/5 | |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2/3 | |
| Presentation | 0.7/1 | |
| My observation | 0.8/1 | |
| Total | 7.5/10 |
You tried well but left much to be desired.
I don't understand why Timothy thought his clothes were wet or why Ronnie came with a pet to share a room? The story ended before it started.
Thank you very much for reviewing my post, it was mainly due to typing mistakes and translating them on Google, actually I should have been more careful, this is the first time I wrote a story like this, which is why it didn't go well, I will try to fix these mistakes in the future and participate in your challenge properly.
Most welcome, we have 4 more weeks!
I will definitely participate in these four weeks.