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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate

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Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate

Dear @ , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3
Presentation0.8/1
My observation0.7/1
Total8.4/10

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  • To be frank you mixed up two stories into one. You have a nice idea about fiction but this one fell a little too far from the original idea in the prompt.

  • If you had kept the first part short and concentrated on the second, it could be a winner.

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Hola , gracias por leerme y la calificación 😊, esa es su apreciación y la respeto, estamos expuestos a ser evaluados, igualmente la escribí con cariño.. muchas bendiciones 😇🙏