You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate
Dear @mayberling, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.75/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 0.85/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.75/1 | By turning Ronnie into a sort of superhero, you took away the moral ambiguity that made the original setup so compelling. |
| Total | 9.35/10 |
Feedback
- You leaned too heavily on fantasy and sci-fi. The prompt asked for fiction with real-life facts to make it relatable, but you didn't balance that aspect. If you had kept Ronnie's identity more mysterious and blended in some real-life grounding with the fantasy, your story would have been much stronger.