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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate
Dear @bokhtiar1444, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.75/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.75/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.75/1 | You used headings even though the instructions clearly asked for none. |
| Total | 8.75/10 |
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- I think you rushed the resolution and made Ronnie's character too easy to figure out. The contest prompt wanted Timothy (and the readers) to remain doubtful about Ronnie's double life for longer. Instead, you leaned into action and gave a clean ending, which stripped away the intrigue.