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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate
Dear @ninapenda, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 0.85/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | The tension you built around the bag of tools was effective. |
| Total | 9.25/10 |
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- Honestly, you revealed Ronnie's secret too neatly. The moment Timothy asked, Ronnie just admitted everything. That feels unrealistic because a real spy or government agent wouldn't just confess their identity to a random roommate.