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RE: Desafío Steemit s26wk2 - Compañero de cuarto misterioso
Dear @paholags, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.75/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | The twist that Ronnie is actually a vampire was bold and unexpected. |
| Total | 9.6/10 |
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- You built strong suspense from the start and closed with a powerful twist. The only drawback was the abrupt jump from realistic mystery to full fantasy.
¡Holaaa amigo!🤗
Te agradezco mucho tu evaluación... Tendré en cuenta tu observación sobre el giro abrupto. Dios mediante, nos seguiremos leyendo en las próximas ediciones... Un fuerte abrazo💚
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