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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2 – Mysterious Roommate
Dear @peachyladiva, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 1/1 | You gave Ronnie emotional depth by adding a traumatic backstory that explains his behavior instead of making him a simple criminal. |
| Total | 9.8/10 |
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- You captured real human emotions while still tying them to the mystery, which made the story memorable for me. The only small drawback is that you softened the suspense a little too early, which made the "mystery" aspect weaker than the original prompt suggested. Still, you created a touching, unique piece that blends realism and melodrama beautifully.
Thank you so much for your feedback. This sure makes my morning.