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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w2| Mysterious Roommate
Dear @jannat7, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 0.8/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | By shifting the villain role onto the landlord, you reduced the dramatic tension between Timothy and Ronnie. |
| Total | 9.2/10 |
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- Timothy himself sometimes faded into the background; most of the focus shifted to Ronnie. Since the original prompt centers around Timothy's suspicion and perspective, I felt Timothy's inner conflict could have been developed more.