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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate
Dear @neelofar, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.6/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 0.8/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | The story had good moments but character depth was missing. |
| Total | 9.25/10 |
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- The reveal scene leaned heavily on Ronnie explaining everything outright. It might have been even stronger if you had let Timothy (and readers) piece together more clues themselves.