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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w2| Mysterious Roommate
Dear @tasonya, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.65/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.85/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.75/1 | Satisfactory |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | You rushed the mystery and leaned too much on telling instead of showing. |
| Total | 9.15/10 |
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- You gave Timothy a bigger role, which was good, but he still came across as passive in key moments. He mostly followed Ronnie rather than making brave choices himself. That limited his character growth. Plus, you used headings, which was clearly not allowed in the contest rules.