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RE: Steemit Challenge S26WK2 — Mysterious Roommate

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Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-2: Mysterious Roommate

Dear @hisgeneral, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.5/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness2.75/3Good
Presentation0.85/1Good
My observation0.75/1Your story met the structure of the contest rules, but it didn't stretch imagination or experiment as much as it could have.
Total8.85/10

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  • You introduced Ronnie's "import-export business" but then abandoned it almost immediately. To me, that weakened the believability of his double life. If he's so good at deception, why not weave that cover story back into his actions?

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    Thanks for the recommendations

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