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RE: Desafío Steemit T26-w2 | Compañero de piso misterioso
Dear @tahispadron, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.85/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 0.8/1 | You didn't really expand on Ronnie's "import-export business" cover story, which was an important part of the original narrative. That thread disappeared once the twin brother twist took over. |
| Total | 9.65/10 |
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- When I read your story, I could clearly see that you made an effort to stay close to the original narrative. You kept the main suspense intact: Timothy's doubts about Ronnie, the discovery of tools, the unease about a hidden truth, and the eventual confrontation. Well done!
Muchas gracias por la verificación.
Me sentí muy bien, creando la historia.