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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate
Dear @eglis, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.65/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 0.8/1 | The "tools and gun" from the original are completely missing. |
| Total | 9.45/10 |
Feedback
- You kept the core idea of Ronnie hiding a secret but your story diverged quite far from the original contest narrative. In the prompt, Ronnie was an adult who came to the city for an "export-import business," but you reimagined him as a 15-year-old boy in a boarding school.