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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w3 : The Boss's Challenge
Steemit Challenge S26-w3 : The Boss's Challenge
Dear @anthony002 , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | |
| Presentation | 0.8/1 | |
| My observation | 0.8/1 | |
| Total | 9/10 |
Use of subheadings make your story sound more like a project report which are unnecessary in fiction writing.
You started as well ended your story abruptly which had a lot of potential.
Thank you very much @dove11 for the thoughtful assessment and constructive feedback.
I truly appreciate the detailed breakdown of my submission. Your observation about the use of subheadings and the abrupt start and end is well taken — I can see how refining those aspects would improve the flow and make the story more immersive as fiction.
This feedback gives me valuable insight into how I can approach future challenges with better structure and storytelling depth. I will surely keep it in mind for my next entries.
Thanks again for the guidance and encouragement! 🙏