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RE: El desafío del jefe

in #fiction-s26wk32 months ago
Steemit Challenge S26-w3 : The Boss's Challenge

Dear @ , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.8/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3
Presentation1/1
My observation0.85/1
Total9.55/10

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  • It sounds cool that the other firm got it done and submitted before MyBudget but that is not business like.

  • Did the car rental agency give the same contract to different agencies? Did they inform MyBudget once they already had the App? Did MyBudget filed a law suit? I agree the fiction allows us to what we feel like doing but we mix fiction with real world facts.

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No entiendo sus interrogantes. Disculpe mi ignorancia... Gracias por la evaluación y las observaciones.

Sir, I am just saying that once a contract is finalized it needs to be terminated officially or parties need to wait until the time limit expires. They can't offer the same job to two agencies unless mutually agreed. Cheers have a nice time.

Todo eso puede suceder, pero no se encuentra en el universo narrativo planteado por el autor. Si todo va asociado a una lógica estrictamente verosímil y anunciada dentro del corpus limitado del texto, no habría ficción sino una informe pormenorizado de los hechos. Saludos, que lo pase bien...

Exactly, that's why I have mentioned it in my terms:

Make your story stand out with an original concept, unexpected plot twists, or memorable characters. I expect participants to venture into the world of imagination and create breathtaking stories, but don't forget the facts.

I hope it explains what I mean, have a nice time,

Perfecto, entrenaré a la imaginación para que deje de imaginar lo que no es legal. Gracias.