Steemit Challenge S26-w3 : The Boss's Challenge
Dear @aviral123 , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Okay |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| My observation | 0.95/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.55/10 |
You have done well with the prompt. If the story had a little more touch of drama and fiction it could be right on top.
Don't you think as a slogan "AApki Surksha Hamare Saath" would be a better option than "Hamari Suraksha Humare Saath"? Let me add in corporate sector the coworkers never feel jealous when the work is assigned to others but they feel, "Good riddance"
First of all thanks for giving me good score
You are right that I could have added more drama to the story, but due to word limitation I could write only this much.
You have given the slogan correctly.
Thankyou
As soon the time of this contest expires, I will post my own version and will try to stay within word-limit and add as much drama and fiction in my story as much possible. You are invited in advance.