Dear @ninapenda, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.85/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.8/3 | Satisfactory |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | The technical side (algorithms, pricing engine, etc.) was mentioned but not explored in much depth. |
| Total | 9.55/10 |
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- You wrote a strong, suspense-driven story that kept me engaged throughout. Well done!
Can't I just score 10? What other depth is required of this story?
Do I need to write 1000 words to get the depth? Won't you get bored reading my entry??? You said you enjoyed my story but still you scored me low. I am not satisfied with your score Sir @waqarahmadshah @dove11
Haha, if you had written 1000 words you wouldn't get the maximum points anyone got so far but lesser than this (according to rules 800 is maximum). By the way, no one has ever scored 10 points in our contests so far because fiction always leaves chance for more. All the best.
CC @waqarahmadshah
But still, no fault was found and yet I'm graded 9.55. Since you saw nothing wrong with the score and no depth was needed by you, I rest my case! If someone deserves 10, it should be given, its fiction and there are people who gets it right!
We do not mention faults but let the scores explain them. You have 4 images in place of 2 and 80 extra words yet you haven't lost much points. Cheers.
Well done!
Hola, amiga. En tu relato veo que manejas cierto nivel de conocimientos en el área de sistemas y retratas muy bien el ambiente que se forma cuando hay proyectos que marchan contra el reloj. El estrés, la ansiedad, la angustia de los personajes, etc. A mi parecer la propuesta plantea una situación especializada, por no decir difícil de desarrollar, y creo que quienes no tengan idea sobre ciertas cosas, seguramente que no van a obtener más de 9 puntos. Saludos cordiales.