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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w3 : The Boss's Challenge
Dear @peachyladiva, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.8/3 | Satisfactory |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | The original prompt asked for competitive fares and real-time demand but you expanded the plot into something more socially conscious. |
| Total | 9.45/10 |
Feedback
- You built a vivid setting and gave John and Timothy stronger personalities, which I appreciated but the boss went from angry to suddenly supportive with no real explanation. That killed the suspense the original narrative tried to set up. You made him too easy to convince.