Dear @bokhtiar1444, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.6/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.7/1 | Satisfactory |
| My observation | 0.7/1 | You went against the rule and used headings. |
| Total | 8.9/10 |
Feedback
- You added the algorithm flaw and client data conflict, which gave the story a unique twist but your story feels more like a realistic corporate success case than a creative piece of fiction. It's well written, but it doesn't really push the imagination or surprise in a way the contest instructions were asking for.