Dear @akareen, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.2/5 | Satisfactory |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.85/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.75/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.5/1 | Less than 500 words. |
| Total | 8.3/10 |
Feedback
- You stuck to the assignment on a basic level, but you played it too safe. You didn't dive into the minds of John and Timothy as the instructions asked. Their struggles, doubts, or conflicts never came through.