Dear @artist1111, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | The original narrative left room for tension between John and Timothy, but in your version, they worked together almost too smoothly. |
| Total | 9.45/10 |
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- You introduced complications like data overload and holiday anomalies, which weren't in the original but added much-needed suspense. Overall, it was a creative story. Well done!