Dear @nirob1613, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.95/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.75/1 | Good |
| My observation | 1/1 | Strong and imaginative entry. |
| Total | 9.5/10 |
Feedback
- You clearly understood the prompt and gave both realism and suspense but some characters (like Butler and Navita) faded into the background after their introduction. I wanted to see them contribute more actively to solving the big challenges.
I tried to make this story a thrilling experience till the end. Although I think I have some shortcomings here. Day by day I will continue to try to improve myself. And I thank you deeply.