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RE: The unlikely friendship

in #fiction-s26wk421 days ago
Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-4: The Unlikely Friendship

Dear @ , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish9.7/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Good
Presentation0.9/1Okay
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.4/10

Feedback

  • Your story line and theme is close to the prompt but a meaningful conversation and a little touch of melodrama between protagonists would make it better.

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Thank you sir

Please sir I don't understand the review please check it