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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w4 : The Unlikely Friendship
Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-4: The Unlikely Friendship
Dear @ , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.6/5 | Okay |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.8/3 | |
| Presentation | 0.8/1 | |
| My observation | 0.8/1 | |
| Total | 9/10 |
You concentrated more on Lisa rather than keeping your attention to auditor. What I feel your story had a touch of sentiments rather than fiction.
Fiction flows like a river which has no obstacles or divisions. I guess the partition lines have slowed down the flow of the story.
Ok ok, buenos días, saludos, gracias por corregirme, bueno 😅, es mi primera vez participando en un reto y lo hice a última hora porque no sabía muy bien como era esto, gracias por dejarme participar, para la próxima seré más concienciente de las reglas y lo que pida, gracias por este desafío. Éxitos y bendiciones