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RE: Desafío Steemit S26-w4: La amistad improbable
Dear @rosselena, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.75/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.95/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 1/1 | Your dialogues between Teena and Dev felt natural and did a good job of showing how often they clashed. |
| Total | 9.6/10 |
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- You added fun touches like colleagues listening outside the office and the fall-into-his-arms moment, which made it unique, though it shifted slightly from the original intent. Overall, it was a well-written story with lively office details.
Muchas gracias por la verificación de mi participación amigo al parecer creo que mejore mi participación con respecto a la anterior