Dear @aviral123, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.6/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | You went against the rule and started with greetings and explanations. |
| Total | 9.25/10 |
Feedback
- Your story is relatable and easy to follow with good real-world examples. But it needs more depth in character growth, more tension in the conflict, and a stronger sense of Teena's independent realization about Dev.