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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w4 : The Unlikely Friendship
Dear @rezaul-420, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.55/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.95/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.8/1 | You didn't follow the core narrative of characters finding mutual respect, so the heart of the contest prompt was missing. |
| Total | 9.2/10 |
Feedback
- In your story Dev turned into the "villain" instead of a flawed but purposeful character. This cut out the chance for the "unlikely friendship" theme to develop.
Thank you very much for reading my post. And for inspiring me in my work.❤️