Dear @mahmud552, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.6/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | The conflict didn't escalate with enough suspense. |
| Total | 9.25/10 |
Feedback
- You skipped some key nuances from the original narrative like the gradual tension building and the sense of "value in each other's viewpoints" before becoming close to each other but still it was a nice effort.
Thank you very much for reviewing my post, I will definitely try to write more beautiful stories and organize them beautifully by mentioning their main points.
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