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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w4 : The Unlikely Friendship
Dear @basil20, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.65/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.8/3 | Satisfactory |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | You resolved the conflict too neatly. |
| Total | 9.25/10 |
Feedback
- The "understanding" in the original narrative was meant to come gradually, with both realizing the value in each other's styles but in your story, the realization hinged mostly on Dev proving himself and it felt one-sided, with Teena adjusting more than Dev.