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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w4 : The Unlikely Friendship.
Dear @alexanderpeace, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.65/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.85/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.75/1 | Satisfactory |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | You stayed true to the characters' essence, but at times it felt more like retelling the prompt than expanding it with depth. |
| Total | 9.1/10 |
Feedback
- You captured Teena and Dev's personalities well, and I liked that you explored their conflict with expenses and the Dubai deal but the alien-symbol ending felt disconnected from the rest of the story.