Second Chance Romance

in #fiction-s26wk512 days ago

Dear friends, I hope you are all well. Alhamdulillah, I am also very well. I am here to participate in Steemit Challenge S26-w5: Second chance romance.

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On the way out, Dennis was on the path of great success, having a big job, a house, a car, and everything inside. But why is he suffering so much and complaining inside? He had a colleague named Jenny in his office. Jenny always shared his life stories with him. Whenever Dennis felt alone and tired, he would call Jenny and share his life stories. Sharing these life stories with her. He would relieve himself from being very tired. One day, suddenly, for some reason, a quarrel and danger arose between Dennis and Tennis, and because of this, their relationship went away. Jenny suddenly left this city.

Dennis, who left this city, has a lot of pain and emotions inside him, but maybe Danish doesn't know that. Dennis, on the other hand, has started moving forward in his life very nicely, he is doing very well. He is moving up like a milky liquid while continuing his career. Seeing others reminds him of his feelings of love. Why did this happen to him? He could never forget Jenny. He always thinks of her morning, evening, and night. He can never erase her from his mind.

This is why he loves Jenny. He was eating in his chest. He looked at the sky in the dark of the night and started thinking. If Jenny came back to this city once again. Maybe our lives would get a second chance again. Suddenly one day he met Danny and asked him for a chance. He ordered coffee for Jenny at the coffee shop and Dennis took another cover and then to him. He apologized and asked for a second chance again. Jenny, I love you so much. Can't I be given another chance? Jenny replied, of course I will give you a second chance. I could never express from my own heart that I love you so much. But that is why I have come back to this city again. Only that person can understand how far away the love emotion is. I can understand that pain and emotion. How much pain I have suffered being away from you. I kept it inside my own heart. I expressed the pain inside me to you and forgot all the words. I gave you a second chance again. We will rebuild the path ahead of our lives.

Jenny was very happy after giving Dennis a second chance. Their lives got a new chance again. Now both of them are very happy and started living their lives very beautifully just like before. And the stories of their emotions and pain inside started again. But this time they decided to get married. This time their lives will be more beautiful.

I will invite my friends to participate here. I hope they will definitely participate here. @samhunnahar @mahmud552 @narocky71

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Thank you very much for mentioning me. I am very happy. I will try to participate in this competition.

Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance

Dear @ariful2, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.5/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.6/3
Presentation0.9/1
My observation0.8/1
Total8.8/10

Feedback

  • You took the story too far off the prompt for instance

Dennis, who left this city, has a lot of pain and emotions inside him, but maybe Danish doesn't know that.

There is no such hint in the prompt.

  • You started your story with intro and all which is a big no, no in fiction niche. If your story had a little more touch and twists of fiction, it could be a great one, imho.

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