Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance
Dear @jiya99, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | Okay |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Okay |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.2/10 |
You started well and created a nice story but gave more important to Jenny.
What you missed is that the story happened immediately after they left Dennis' cabin but you carried it too far, two years to be precise.
Oh ... Thanks for your feedback 😃