Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance
Dear @ soulfuldreamer, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| Total | 9.7/10 |
It was close! I said it because you mentioned the prompt. A little more Dennis and it would reach to the top. But the story is top notch even if Jenny replaced Dennis as protagonist. By the way she was his coworker and not looking for a job when she entered his cabin.
You said
And before he could stop her, she turned and walked away, leaving him with the echo of a second goodbye.
I said
"That evening he was alone when Jenny entered his cabin. For some time they talked about work and personal life. Soon their conversation turned into heated argument and then they walked out of the office..."
Well, I would say that you've marked me graciously. I didn't realize I had to follow the prompt literally; I thought it was just an example or maybe a little clue. But now I understand that it was the skeleton of the story. I came across this contest while browsing and felt compelled to participate. 🙂
Thank you for your feedback.
I must admit you did well! It's a perfect story which was close enough. What you got is what you deserved so I have no role to play in that, have a great time!
0.00 SBD,
0.10 STEEM,
0.10 SP